Dear my bed,
Oh, how I miss you!
Only the smell of freshly laundered smell lingers near me when I go to sleep. Always I have loved you as a forever good friend. The smile you give me makes every stress inside y head fly away. Orange, yellow, white, and green those of the colors comfort me even just by looking at them. I am happy when I run into your never closed arms.
All the days I have told you my problems. You comforted with your soft speaking words. I cannot tell you to be my friend. You are way more than a bed. As I sob, you listen to me, as I laugh you laugh with me.
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You are everything.
Like a mom comforting a child, a brother playing with his sister, a friend talking to me. You are all of the above. You are the last thing I see before going to sleep and the first thing I see when I wake up.
Oh, how I miss you my bed. I have endless love for you. I never will dislike you. You are a sweet charming existence for me. To last forever........
Love,
Hyoseo Kim
Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great job you have done on this ode. you made use of metaphors and personifications throughout the ode. I really enjoyed it!
Hi!
ReplyDeleteNice work on your ode to your bed. It seems that your bed means a great deal to you. Anyways, it was great to read your well-written ode to your bed. Keep up the good work~
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)